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Jonathan Mayhew reflected a few days ago on the "idea that poetry is a distinctive kind of thinking, that cannot be replaced by paraphrase ... an idea so basic and foundational to modern poetics, that it can serve almost as a litmus test. Someone who thinks of poetry as fancy language for dressing up other kinds of 'propositional content' is on the other side of a great divide."
I initially posted a comment in Jonathan's comment box to the effect that I thought one would be hard pressed to find anyone who would own up to being on that other side of the divide, especially among poets themselves: that even those poets, for example, whom we consider to be bogged down in an enervated practice of using verse as a convenient and supposedly attractive medium for the expression of familiar sentiments would claim, if asked, that they too believe poetry cannot be reduced to paraphrase.
One possibility here is that these poets are simply deluded about their own beliefs (whatever that might mean), that they do one thing and say another. After thinking about it some more, however, I'm not so convinced that we can separate this kind of "delusion" from our own ideas about what kind of "thinking" poetry performs, or consists in.
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In the course of responding to Jonathan's comments,
Nick Piombino makes reference to Wittgenstein's
Zettel (see his earlier posts about
Zettel on
Fait Accompli over the past few weeks). Nick's thoughtful and probing remarks prompted me to check out
Zettel from the library, and it's given me occasion to think in greater depth about some of these broader areas of disagreement among readers of poetry.
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I--horrors!--don't own a copy of Coolidge's
Solution Passage, and I don't recall the original poem, but it is obvious nonetheless that
Jordan's paraphrase of page 31 (undertaken upon a prompt from
Jonathan) initiates an exciting new form whose possibilities should continue to be explored: prose paraphrases which themselves constitute poems. Could Jordan's text help a student "understand" Coolidge's? Maybe. But really what it does is submit a new poem to the understanding, to be understood.
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I mentioned Ashbery earlier as a contemporary poet with respect to whom paraphrase might still be a useful strategy. This, however, needs careful qualification. A reader of "The Skaters," for example, might benefit from at least a limited use of paraphrase in order to learn a basic lesson: that the "depth" and "complexity" of Ashbery's gorgeously attenuated periods, when the poem is reduced to more manageable bite-sized chunks of referential language, disappears along with the poem. This would be a case where that old cliche turned out to be true: too much analysis
does destroy the poem. But only the kind of analysis that is founded on the belief that "poetic meaning" can be distilled and apprehended through grammatical means. Ashbery's work, to be sure, seems at times designed to work best when the reader is drunk.
In the case of Jordan's Coolidge paraphrase, something quite different is going on. As I said before, it's not that the paraphrase "explains" the poem; it uses the outward disguise of paraphrase as an excuse for more poetry. I know of intelligent readers who will not be able to see the poetry in such deliberately flat, pseudo-expository writing. But they are intelligent despite this inability, not because of it.
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As I was going to sleep last night, I was thinking about a topic to blog about today: the process by which poems become familiar, and thus acquire an air of "classic necessity." This came to me as, for a different reason, I started hearing these lines from Wordsworth's "The world is too much with us" in my head: "Great God! I'd rather be / A pagan suckled in a creed outworn...." I was thinking about how "meaning" or "propositional content" is intertwined with soundplay in those words, and how the "emotive function," in Jakobson's terminology, with its "set toward the addresser," is at least as essential to what makes the poem "poetic" as the "poetic function," with its "set toward the message." But then my mind wandered (I was partly unconscious at this point) to the songs on my iTunes browser, and how the various "smart playlists," like all GUI icons and the like, serve as metaphors for a certain set of abstract operations. Then I thought about polar bears wearing neckties, which has nothing to do with this discussion. Then I thought about the iTunes playlists again, and how the songs make it into the "most played" list--especially new songs, ones that I download from the mp3 blogs and keep around long enough to see whether they grow on me or not. And one thing, it occurred to me, is that they start to sound like what they are: songs I have heard before.
By this I don't mean that they remind me of other songs I've heard before, though this sometimes happens too; I mean they remind me of themselves. At some point the song passes from being a fresh imprinting of unfamiliar sounds onto a blank space of listening, to being an anticipated series of chord progressions, tempo changes, vocal inflections, etc. Depending on the song, this will take longer in some cases than others. Some songs start to produce this effect the first time through, if they're simple and repetitive enough (e.g., The Carolina Tar Heels' "Peg and Awl" or Kelly Clarkson's "Since U Been Gone"). Others may be in one way or another too subtle or complex or low-key to register upon one listening: in a sense, you don't really hear the song until you hear it for the second time, or maybe even the third or fourth or seventh time (for example, one song that took several listenings to imprint itself on my familiarity cells is
Van Elk's "Salome").
Often the songs that take the longest to make it onto the radar screen are also the ones that stay there the longest afterward as well, though there are exceptions. We all know songs that we loved the first twelve times, but that we can never hear again without screaming for as long as we live. So you see where I'm going with this--it's the same with poems, often. You don't really know the poem until you've returned to it, maybe repeatedly, and over a considerable period of time. (It's not enough to read it multiple times in one sitting; you need the perspective of temporal distance.)
Lo and behold, one of the first blogposts I read today after getting up was
Nada's meditation on incantatoriness:
Who else has an inner-aural experience of one's own poems, or favorite poems by others, as a well-worn groove of often-repeated, unwilled, heard lines? Or even just a simple collocation that comes back and back and back?
This was exactly what had been happening to me with the Wordsworth lines, which had led me to wonder about the role of mechanical recurrence, arbitrary or otherwise, in a poem's accrual of a particular variety of "meaning." The passage I cited from
Zettel a couple of days ago dealt with this, which may be why I started thinking about all this in the first place:
195. Let us imagine a kind of puzzle picture: there is not one particular object to find; at first glance it appears to us as a jumble of meaningless lines, and only after some effort do we see it as, say, a picture of a landscape.--What makes the difference between the look of the picture before and after the solution? It is clear that we see it differently the two times. But what does it amount to to say that after the solution the picture means something to us, whereas it meant nothing before?
Like a song, there is a sense in which a poem takes on a different ontological status depending on the stage of its having-already-been-experiencedness. There are definitely poems I experience as "classic" in a sense even if I don't personally care for them, simply because I have run into them so often and their words have come to seem "necessary," as I put it earlier, or "inevitable." I would put lots of poems by what
Ron Silliman would call "School of Quietude" poets in this category--poems like Mark Strand's "Eating Poetry," for instance (this is also a good example of poems, like pop songs, that seem great at first, maybe when you're young and impressionable, but soon become horribly cloying). Not a month goes by that I don't involuntarily think, to my dismay, "I romp with joy in the bookish dark." It's like a Hall-and-Oates earworm. "Leave me alone, I'm a faaamily man...."
But the same process applies with poems that I really do value highly. The Wordsworth poem, again, is a case in point. It's tricky to break poems up into isolated sound bites, lines, phrases, etc., but there's something about "Great God! I'd rather be / A pagan suckled in a creed outworn" that is, to my ear, inescapably superior to "I romp with joy in the bookish dark." To begin with--everybody say it with me--"propositional content." In part, at least. Wordsworth's phrase fits more information, in a more sophisticated manner, into a small space than Strand's does. But sophisticated how? Here we can go in an abstract-formal direction (meter and rhyme), or a concrete-formal direction (the particular collocation of assonant and consonant units in a particular rhythmic arrangement) or a combination of both, but in any case there does appear to be a sense in which elements that do not have to do with "propositional content" do influence that aspect of the poem we would like to call its "meaning."
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When and how does an expression of emotion, or some other intangible affective state, translate into a semantic event by which it can be said that something is "meant" (as opposed to merely exhibited)? My sense is that Wittgenstein would say that this is a false distinction--that "exhibited" is all we end up with. When, however, the emotive gesture is combined with the poetic gesture (motivated phonetic arrangement, etc.), and all the various cultural codes and conventions that attend the act of reading poetry are brought into play, it becomes more difficult to dismiss the proposition that there is a special kind of poetic "meaning." If there is such a thing, and if it can be analyzed in any coherent way, it is radically unstable and inconstant: the act of identifying it, like the act of observation in the Schrodinger's Cat paradox, may turn it into something different from what it was before we identified it.
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What Does Poetry Mean?
--for Nada
Poetry means to be able to see & hear the sensuality of soft consonants aligned with a pair of vowels.
Poetry means the political rationale for shattering conventions.
Poetry means epic stakes. There's something that will not be contained in the form.
Poetry means more stressed syllables relative to the total number of syllables.
Poetry means something, and it is a fact that poets who are used to broadcasting can read into the microphone.
Poetry means you have to use antique language. I'm not a poet.
Poetry means and is about. Poems must not exceed 30 lines.
Poetry means better poetry. We don’t necessarily care about coherence.
Poetry means retranscribing with abruptness the sputtering of the modern. You define yourself as an irrelevant blowhard.
Poetry means Duck and Chicken. I also concur with Moose.
Poetry means nothing less than simultaneously and inseparably creating events and their language. But it's fuckin' poetry, man, and good.
Poetry means a lot more to other cultures.
Poetry means something. It's nice that you want to share it with other people.
Poetry means 25 blocks of Manhattan 40 years ago.
Poetry means from their particular vantage point.
Poetry means reading it now.
Poetry means there is little room for error. Beyond that everything is up.
Poetry means repeating the same experiment on more poems and scribes in order to achieve more.
Poetry means that he must never again be "delighted and awed."
Poetry means paying close attention to the words people use when they talk about policy.
Poetry means the continuation of the sense of a phrase.
Poetry means to show us things fall apart. We all know that Hamlet offers to kill the man that lets me.
Poetry means that you must become hungry.
Poetry means to learn it by heart. We must listen to great poetry without analysis.
Poetry means a lot to me. Thank you for writing it and your time tonight.
Poetry means something special to the artist and the viewers. The description of your dad is incredible. I especially like the "meatballs."
Poetry means white consolidated industry IUQs.
Poetry means that I want to be the world peaceful. I hope the peaceful day will come someday.
Poetry means peace of the world. The pigeon is the symbol of the peace, I think. I hope most of people become happy.
Poetry means little more than prose. Both evoke a superior reality.
Poetry means absolutely less than nothing. However, although.
Poetry means that there isn't much chance for someone like me to get snapped up.
Poetry means my poetry, sometimes other people's poetry too.
Poetry means that the plot and the character are wonderfully expressed, and emotionally far more powerful than William.
Poetry means the rediscover of the golden age, the recover of the illo tempore through the magic of the verb.
Poetry means stating a distinct historical order, that is a new way.
Poetry means to say something lucid. This is an old Emersonian moment of mine. That is, Emerson has a crack.
Poetry means choosing a privileged point of view for understanding the history of Italian.
Poetry means that the text has a richness that you might not expect. Instead, expect a hand-clapping extravaganza.
Poetry means "power," "governing authority," "state power." Here it is limping sway.
Poetry means to become acquainted with the poet. "I don't know many poets."
Poetry means that women formulate strategies to avoid gender-association. Ania spends half of every month in London.
Poetry means a lot to her, which figures.
Poetry means "to make," so it has to do with making stuff.
Poetry means that at one point or another one had to declare an allegiance or an interest in how humans love things.
Poetry means nothing, whose conception of love is far from idealized.
Poetry means merely attending poetry readings. A person cannot be forced to write a poem.
Poetry means not only performing virtuoso linguistic exercises in an epistemological void but having a grand-scale effect on nature. I like rhyming poetry, myself.
Poetry means that which crams more and penetrates deeper. It's a metaphor for life, I want to say to you.
Poetry means everything to me, and I write it for myself now. And only at such moments I am a poet.
Poetry means stuff like "The Cremation of Sam McGee." Glad we went, though.
Poetry means poetry! I’ll give you chapter and verse! What do you want? Aristotle? Do you want Aristotle?
Poetry means very good poetry, and that by Viking-related men and women.
Poetry means--is both a cause and an effect of the fact--that the iambic is more flexible and various. The best approach I have found is simply average.
Poetry means one is willing and ready to be sacrificed. Invest in a dictionary and a thesaurus. Know the rules of grammar.
Poetry means poetry available in Hong Kong. French food is French food available in Hong Kong.
Poetry means remaining a private poet.
Poetry means natural language and lingo. Robert Frost was manipulating my emotions.
Poetry means many texts can be examined easily.
Poetry means the emergency of our values.
Poetry means that we have so many pictures to paint with vernaculars.
Poetry means that the material includes lines 12 to 16 of the poem. The name of the poem is not in the reference.
Poetry means something now.
Poetry means that there are at least two English Canadian poets who can afford to pay rent each year.
Poetry means the things or fortune of this life.
Poetry means a plunderer, a robber. He is a powerful wizard.
Poetry means being the speaking subject. Lower your expectations.
Poetry means not being able to hear ourself talk, which means we don't wanna talk.
Poetry means the weaker sister has to go.
Poetry means more than your sister's life will ever be, I think it's about to be cut short.
Poetry means so much. I highly recommend it because it blends Eastern philosophy.
Poetry means a lot to me and I kind of like it. Somebody sent me an email and said they liked my poem and said it was like creative. Which one?
Poetry, even very bad baby pagan post-sixties California ex-flower-child beach bum poetry, means very little to the cruisers on the Boulevard.
Poetry means something to people. That is surely important to any artist.
Poetry means you're gonna kill yourself. Weird.
Poetry means I don't have to cite any sources and can defile it.
Poetry means if it does not pay, it brings him fame, respectfulness in times of reverse.
Poetry means a lot to how I express myself. I would like to share this poem with everyone, and it follows after my postscript.
Poetry means four things. This is one reason it is great.
Poetry means the decay of American ideals--if there is any decay.
Poetry means that thinking listens attentively to language. Poet is the defender of being's home, only in the homeland of language.
Poetry means to open up the vivid field of poetry written by poets.
Poetry means double the pleasure for the reader.
Poetry means to link the wisdom the author acquired playing congas and listening to giants.
Poetry means rather than a universal truth, in the more complex case one would have a kind of truth that functions only in the context of local pockets. I'd rather have a piece of toast.
Poetry means literally poets and readers reflecting the diversity in unison. Here comes the other part.
Poetry means life, the sense of being yourself in a world were lovers belong only to the moon and the sea it's their only refuge.
Poetry means a complete poem of less than 250 words or more than two pages.
Poetry means rhyming the last words in couplets without any consideration of meter. Just drive me nuts.
Poetry means I'm married to everyone. Thank you.
Poetry means that drug references creep in almost by default.
Poetry means reducing what happens in too many neighborhoods to Bing Bam Boom.
Poetry means different things to different people. And you can quote me on that one.
Poetry means a lot, and I seem to fail to express how poetry chaged my life.
Poetry means too many words. I was taught that way in high school, they used to make us write.
Poetry means that poetic language and devices are used.
Poetry means something to someone else. I guess that's what hurts me most.
Poetry means to expose the insidious operation of linguistic habits already in place. In most ways, of course.
Poetry means to form soil plains over Marlene's mammoth. "Here lies people via spurning."
Poetry means scrolling comforts along with willing auktion zigaretten pendulum. And when that happens it naturally follows that the nation is approaching its end.
Poetry means in other words and so violate it.
Poetry means--at least to us--that we are the avant-garde.
Poetry means I'll be churning these bitches out like crazy.
Poetry means a lot. Could you stop by again? That'd be cool.
Poetry means more than all the Barry Manilow albums in the world.
Poetry means Nada to me.