Friday, August 19, 2005

Guest Blogger Rodney Koeneke: Million Poem March

Jordan’s about to hit another century on his Million Poems Journal. A recent favorite:

1687

The question then becomes
Are we going at the speed
We believe we'll be able to maintain

Or is this is some un-
Clarified wish to

Barricade ourselves
In some momentum
That can't be scripted

Except by moving onward
Outward and reddening like a tomato

I don't stub my toe
On the index
But keep flying
Farther towards

The differentiated
Spastic

Quiddity.


This could be the theme song for blogging. Keep going, Jordan--we’re watching!

Once I hit "save" the keys to the blog go back to Kasey. Thanks for checking in and Kasey, thanks for the tree time. Your regularly scheduled programming will resume from Ashland next week.

Bye. :)

--Rodney Koeneke
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Thursday, August 18, 2005

Guest Blogger Rodney Koeneke: Wasted Style?

Blogs are sometimes seen as consolations for not living in a major metropolitan center, a way for “one of the two poets in Cinncinati,” as I once heard someone introduced at a reading, to take part in the big city fun. But I wonder if the more established poetry scenes are in turn becoming adjunct to blogs. At more than one reading in San Francisco I’ve heard people joke about whether we’d see it on the blogs the next day, and Stephanie Young’s shift from text to Flickr has added the buzz of camera presence to a growing rage (OK, maybe ragelet) for media coverage.

I can't tell how much of my pleasure in seeing an event I've been to blogged is just gossip column vanity (“Look, Lovey. They mentioned ME!”) and how much is a real turn to the Internet for “life information,” my new favorite critical term from Drew Gardner’s blog. Either way, the blog phenomeon’s raised the bar on what I expect from a successful reading--if it doesn’t get blogged, it feels somehow vanished and pointless, like a weekday drunk.

This recently happened to my favorite poetry event of the summer, The Drunk Sheep Cabaret. Tanya Brolaski, who along with Cynthia Sailers has run Oakland’s New Brutalist reading series for the last two years, launched the Cabaret last July, a totally disarming chance for poets to leave their writing & theory at home and indulge a hammy urge for applause. This year’s was even better, since Tanya managed to infuse the whole evening with her own sensibility: country crooners, fake preachers, old-timey burlesque dancers and revolving bottles of whorskey created a forgotten railroad America that Tanya’s made completely her own. The place was packed: 60? 160? Does it matter? Not really I guess. This was one of those primal events where the community presents itself to itself, & feels safe enough to be amateur; where it’s not as important to be a good singer as to be a poet trying to sing. I think only Tanya and Cynthia, with their record of “community building” (ugh), could pull this kind of night off. By its nature maybe, it was sort of “off-blog.”

But I was disappointed not to find anything about it on Google the next day, except for a handful of photos on Stephanie’s Flickr page. Am I getting corrupted? Would one or three blog posts, with attendent pings in the comment box, have made the event any more real? Let me know, preferably on blog :)

--Rodney Koeneke
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Wednesday, August 17, 2005

Guest Blogger Rodney Koeneke: Pasta a la Gizzi

I’m in the middle of a name shift--KONE-uh-key to KER-ne-kuh. My wife Lesley thinks the German pronunciation sounds better and she wants our son to have it. She’s a pro at these things, having swung her own family, Poirier, from POOR-ee-er to PWOR-ee-ay.

I remember noticing as a kid how all the famous poets I could think of had these rich English-sounding names--Wordsworth, Byron, Berryman, Ashbery, Dickinson, Lowell, er, Rich. I tried hard to like Roethke for no other reason than that he had an “oe” and “ke” in his name, which I’m still not sure how to pronounce. Same with Koethe. Rhymes with Goethe?

The first real literary concentration of I guess what you’d call "ethnic" names I ever saw was in the Donald Allen New American Poetry anthology, where O’Haras, Duncans, Gleasons, Olsons, Blackburns, Adamses, Williamses and Guests shared pride of place with Levertovs, Eigners, Meltzers, Lamantias, Loewinsohns, Wienerses and Kochs. I wonder for how many people in the '60s--and even now--the special promise and threat of that collection began with the Table of Contents.

But the top spot on my list of all-time-favorite poets’ names goes to Michael Gizzi. Like his poetry, it’s fun to just say out loud. I’d like to know how much those double ‘zz’s flanked by the goofy ‘i’s drive his poetic practice, where neologisms and hinky slang and improbable made-up proper names get to buzz like they haven’t since be-bop (Klackoveesedstene!)

Last month I found his "Just Like a Real Italian Kid" in the SPD archives, which is like finding a sliver from the True Cross in that warehouse at the end of Raiders of the Lost Ark. It’s an amazing little chapbook that in 20 short pages manages to connect the jazzy, slangy, fun-just-to-say-it wordplay of his other books to the voicings and rhythms of immigrant Italian English:

“Stazzit! Mangare! Horizontal wicks of fennel breath crisscross dinner board to lodge in prepubescent mustachio. Yuk! how can you eat that shit? Perpetual smiles of grief-striken gumbare.”

The snappy rush of these 14 short pieces makes an implicit argument for the pleasures of English as an almost second language, a tongue that still feels new enough to stick out and twist around. But Gizzi’s also a serious recorder, out to get down the echoes of the “latinate herb breathy ‘come sei bello ragazzo’ litany” before the onset of “primness on Lake Amnesia,” where everything ethnic sinks and goes white:

“Edison it was said had invented the phonograph to capture Caruso for posterity, that catch in the throat when he cried about being so much emotion trapped in the garb of a clown. That essence is Italian pressed into an essence of plastic come to mean maudlin. Those Pavlovian platters were tear-jerkers sure to make a paesan let his hair and everything else down.”

Wunderschön.

--Rodney Koeneke
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Tuesday, August 16, 2005

Guest Blogger Rodney Koeneke: The Mysteries of Killian

Kevin Killian is so ubiquitous and fundamental a presence in San Francisco that it’s easy, like with breathing, to forget what a miracle he is. You know those “ands” most of us put after “poet” in the bio line—poet and translator, poet and teacher, poet and insurance salesman--to help sugar the fact that we’re really only poets? KK has like fifty that all totally belong there, each one equally credible: poet and novelist and art critic and playwright and Spicer scholar and Kylie Minogue fanatic and mystery connessieur and walking film encylopedia and collector and ... you get the idea. The tricky part with Kevin is trying to figure out what belongs on which side of the “and.” Is it “poet and Kylie Minogue fan” or “Kylie Minogue fan/poet?” That undecidability is a large part of the fascination of Kevin’s writing for me, whatever form it happens to take, but none of his previous work quite prepared me for his newest assault on that most contemporary of mini-genres: the Amazon review.

Since February 2004, Kevin has written over 800 reviews--often at a rate of 3 or more per day--under the name “Kevin Killian.” At the time of this writing, after months of bobbing in the high 6 and low 700s, “Kevin’s” finally broken into the hotly contested Top 500 Reviewer zone, helped maybe a little by Kasey’s inclusion of his name in the blogroll (the most caring blogroll on the Internet, anywhere) last week.

I can’t believe very many of the 1,997 people who’ve found his reviews helpful though are poets. Judging from the kind of reviews he writes, they’re wearers of glow-in-the-dark body jewelry, givers of corporate giftbaskets, model airplane enthusiasts, fans of “Deuce Bigelow: European Gigolo,” admirers of Victorian shortbread moulds, children of aging parents and parents of wayward teens and rabid watchers of just about any movie released since pictures started talking.

What fascinates me about these reviews is not just their daunting number or literary quality (they’re universally witty, informed, & undecidably “into” the subject in a way I recognize from Killian’s other writing), but the feeling that for all their promise of intimacy and personal revelation, they CAN’T POSSIBLY be written by a single person. Is “Kevin Killian” really Kevin Killian? Could anyone be? Could he really have met with and written about such a huge indiscriminate chunk of our culture? And, if he could, why would he? Who’s the readership? Where’s the book deal? Who’ll ever read the entire corpus to distill from those sage addresses to wearers of body jewelry and makers of Victorian shortbread the genuine quintessence of Kevin Killian?

It’s exactly the willingness to cast his verbal brio into the cyberwind that makes “About Kevin Killian” one of the most innovative writing projects going today. It looks the gargantuan challenges the Internet poses to writing and our idea of the writer straight in the eye and coyly asks: “Was this review helpful to you?” Helpful votes: 1,998.

---Rodney Koeneke
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Monday, August 15, 2005

Guest Blogger Rodney Koeneke: Voice Lessons

(tap. tap. cough) ... hello. Is this thing on? Kasey asked me to blogsit for a few days while he’s in Santa Cruz, so I am. Talking into the blogosphere is more than a little scary, especially for the dedicated lurker. Its angers and intelligences, its meme cults, its covert hierarchies and overt multitudinousness are big fun from the safe zone of a dayjob, but they get considerably more intimidating from the other side of the mike. I thought it’d be fun to it try for a few days though & test the air outside the comment box.

What I like best about blogs--and what I fear about contributing to one--is how the demand for new content draws bloggers into revealing more of themselves than they would in more carefully managed forums like the review or the contributor’s note or--especially--the protective habitat of the poem. Writing is often a form of hiding, a chance to reengineer your social self in a way the blog doesn’t really stand for. Sooner or later, the implacable demand for content sucks you into a flame war, or provokes the admission of a heretofore carefully hidden dislike, or exposes your most characteristic stylistic tics, or just compels you to tell the world one grey morning your cat’s name is Missy and she’s recovering from an excruciating urinary infection.

I eat this stuff up (and I’m 100% pulling for Missy) but I also miss the aura of mystery that once attached to certain poets, like I miss smoke in bars and the heavy ticks of the dial on rotary phones. It’s hard for me to imagine “cool” writers like Eliot or Ashbery or Oppen with a blog; their artfully modulated personas don’t seem to fit with the medium (“hot” ones like Stein or Ginsberg or Whitman: natural born bloggers). Maybe the days of remote Parnassian (or was it just WASPy?) grandeur are behind us, gone the way of art pour le art dandyism and the genius alcoholic--gestures that aren’t really available or useful to us anymore, except as Halloween dressup.

If so, how much credit (or blame) belongs to the blogs? Has the Internet done for the poet what sound did for the silent stars? Too early to say, but maybe this is a good time to start trying out my voice. “Watson--come here--I need you.”

--Rodney Koeneke
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Monday, August 08, 2005

Totally Obvious Observations

Some "totally obvious" reflections on poetics and other aesthetic matters:

Some people appreciate poetry and others don't.

If a poem doesn't capture the reader's attention in some way, he or she won't want to read it.

Things that capture some people's attention leave other people totally flat.

The reasons for liking or not liking something can be critical or non-critical or both.

People sometimes change their mind about what they like or don't like in poetry and the other arts.

Reasons for changing one's mind can be critical or non-critical or both.

Sometimes people read things even when they don't want to--like if they have to for a class, or if they just want to feel like they are "well-rounded."

Sometimes (usually?) it is harder to explain why we do like something than why we don't.

It's hard to explain to someone who doesn't like poetry why it might be worth their while to give it more of a chance.

You can't usually make much money writing poetry.

Poetry is cheaper to produce than visual art, because you don't have to buy as many materials.

More people listen to music on a regular basis than read poetry.

Music will usually liven up a party more effectively than poetry will.

"Pop critics" are different from plain old music (rock, jazz, hip hop, etc.) critics in that plain old music critics are mainly interested in the music itself and pop critics are also (perhaps sometimes chiefly) interested in its popularity.

Most ordinary people (non-critics) who like pop are more interested in it as music than in its popularity (except to the extent that they might be interested in being popular themselves, or being associated with popular and famous people).

To be interested in popularity is not necessarily the same thing as wanting to be popular.

Lots of people would like to be popular, however, who would never admit it.

Being popular is fun (except when it's stressful).

Most popular poets are not "popular" on the same level as popular musicians.

Popular musicians who also write poetry are often not taken very seriously by people who mainly write poetry.

If you're already popular for some other reason, that can help make it easier to get your poetry published.

It's hard to explain why Mei-Mei Berssenbrugge is "objectively" a better poet than Jimmy Carter (or vice versa) to someone who disagrees with you or who just doesn't care about poetry.

It's pretty hard to explain to anyone else, for that matter.

Many of the expressions we tend to use to show that we value poetry are tired platitudes.

Just because we can't express our appreciation for something coherently doesn't necessarily mean that it is not really worthy of appreciation.

Just because we can express our negative opinion of something coherently doesn't necessarily mean that is not worthy of appreciation either.

Being incoherent is not the same as being "wrong" and being coherent is not the same as being "right."

It may not be possible to prove that one piece of art is objectively "better" or "worse" than another on an abstract, general level.

In one sense, a painting of a real tree that "really looks like" the tree is a better painting than one that doesn't.

In another sense, the one that doesn't may be a better painting than the one that does (for example, if it demonstrates that the artist has skillfully learned the techniques of impressionism, or simply if more people enjoy looking at it).

A poem about a tree can't resemble a tree in the way a painting of a tree can.

It doesn't really make much sense to talk about "a piece of (instrumental) music about a tree."

A metrical poem with precise meter is better than one with sloppy meter for a reader who values precision over sloppiness.

A metrical poem with sloppy meter is better than one with precise meter for a reader who values something else in the poem (including, perhaps, sloppiness) over precision.

Two non-metrical poems cannot be evaluated in relation to each other on the basis of meter--or they can, but it will only matter to the people who choose to evaluate them in that way.

Our favorite poems are the ones we like the most, unless we can include poems we don't like among our favorite poems.

Most people would think that you can't have a poem you don't like as your favorite poem.

If we define "favorite" in some other way--as "regarded as most likely to be successful" in some context, for example--it might make sense to speak of a favorite poem being one we don't like.

Personal preference isn't the only reason for being interested in something.

Some people find poetry more interesting because it raises these kinds of issues than because of whatever is "in" the poetry itself (or they may be equally interested in both).

It's easier to teach people objective facts about something than to teach them that they should (or shouldn't) like it.

Sometimes the objective facts about a poem (when and how it was written, its publication and reception history, etc.) can influence our feelings about the poem either positively or negatively.

Sometimes people like things just because they know a lot about them.

Not all things are equally easy to like just because you know a lot about them. One might develop a fondness for the subject of fungus because of one's expertise in fungology and thus be able to say on that basis along that one "likes" fungus, but a holocaust scholar with a great deal of specialized knowledge about concentration camps would generally never claim to "like" them (even though the conditions for the holocaust scholar's interest in them are in some--though not all--ways the same as those for the fungolist's interest in fungus).

The reasons for studying something and the reasons for liking something are not always the same, but sometimes they may overlap.

Reasons for liking things, when those reasons are different from the reasons that arise as an effect rather than as a cause of one's specialized interest, are generally related to some quality believed to be possessed by the things themselves.

Some people who like cats will tend to like poems about cats simply because they are about cats--or more precisely, because they are written by people who like cats for people who like cats.

Some people who like cats like poems about cats that vividly capture some feeling or impression they themselves have had or might have had about cats: for example, the way they brush their paws over their whisker when cleaning themselves, or the way they wiggle their haunches when stalking prey. They like these poems because the poems in some way bring them closer to the experiences they associate with their love for cats.

Some people who don't particularly like cats might still like a poem about cats if it is able to produce in them the same vivid sensations as those described above, purely because they admire the poem's ability to render sensual impressions. They might like a poem about fungus (or even Auschwitz) for the same reasons.

It is more acceptable to say that one likes a poem about Auschwitz than to say that one likes Auschwitz (in the sense of being interested in the topic of Auschwitz as a theme for study, say). It's still a little sketchy, though.

Some people like poems that are like language or logic puzzles, in which there is something to think about and finally "get."

Some people (not all) who like poems built around vivid imagery [wow, at first for some reason I mistyped imagery as injury] dislike poems that are like puzzles because they distrust intellectual cleverness as an aesthetic raison d'etre, if not entirely.

People tend to have familiar categories that they summon up to explain why certain poems are unsatisfying: categories like "glib," "sentimental," "cerebral," "trite," "pretentious," "academic," etc.

Many of these terms could be replaced in given instances with terms that are roughly synonyms but that throw positive rather than negative spins on the poems in question. For example, "elegant" for "glib," "emotional" for "sentimental," "smart" for "cerebral," "traditional" for "trite," "ambitious" for "pretentious," "theoretically informed" rather than "academic," etc.

All poets are "language poets" in that all poets use language to write their poems.

There isn't actually a "School of Quietude" (like an institution with that name in Des Moines or somewhere).

Not all poems rhyme.

Wednesday, August 03, 2005

Rod Smith's Fear the Sky

Received: Rod Smith's Fear the Sky on Narrow House Recordings.

I would love to see more CDs like this from poets. I wonder how many other poets--even among ones I admire immensely--could pull this off with Rod's success. He brings a sensibility to it, a subtle post-punk poise that lends the album attitude without resorting to crudely "performative" theatrics. With Rod it's all implied: a deadpan confidence that focuses the listener's attention not on his "stage presence" but on the work.

That's not to say that performative techniques (e.g. jazz inflections, chanting, voice modulations of various sorts) are all automatically cliched, since I know of lots of readers who use them in fresh and interesting ways, and who I think could do exciting things in recording projects of this kind.

Another exemplary recording already in existence is the audio edition of Patrick Durgin's Kenning, the first disk of which features various readers including Bernstein, Andrews, Allen Ginsberg, and many others, and the second of which is all Leslie Scalapino reading from Way. In dis pense a ble. I've used it in classrooms on several occasions, with great responses.

Tuesday, August 02, 2005

Tone & Flow



Jordan notes the lack "of any clear definitive writing on: timbre and flow."

The easy and obvious explanation for this lack is that both these words refer to ideas that are chronically unclear and undefinitive in historical practice, at least when applied to poetry (which I'm assuming is what Jordan is mostly interested in too, though I may be wrong there). I would add another: tone. Actually, tone and timbre kind of amount to the same thing in such applications, and since tone is probably the more familiar word for the concept I have in mind, I'll stick to it.

Flow in particular is, as anyone who has ever taught poetry or creative writing knows, a much-abused term. What do you like about this poem? I like the way it flows. It has a good flow. I suddenly remember that I discussed all this before, back in January 2003. Check it out if you like. In that earlier discussion, I connected the idea of flow to cadence, with its connotations of falling motion and/or rest. I didn't then make the further connection to Zukofsky's definition of poetic "objectification" (as in "sincerity and objectification") as "rested totality," but it's occurring to me now. What seems to me to be contained in the notion of flow is the precept of some conclusion, and an appreciation of the way that different movements along a trajectory seem to "anticipate" that conclusion. A minimistically simple model for this is invoked in the old saying "waiting for the other shoe to drop." On the other hand, someone might say, we can conceive of a "perpetual flow." But can we really? Even in such a case, isn't the idea of cessation always a possibility? Could it be a flow at all if we weren't able to imagine its being stopped? Can we look at a river and not think of a place where it empties out?

If someone were put on the spot and forced to be coherent about their appreciation of a poem's "flow," assuming one possessed the patience, vocabulary, and mental agility, wouldn't one end up detailing many movements toward rest within a larger pattern of such movements, and placing these movements in relation to one another? In other words, doesn't flow always imply a pattern? Even if it's an incompletely or imperfectly imagined pattern?

Tone is even vaguer, if possible. There is a casual meaning to it that doesn't pose that great a difficulty, as when one says "Don't take that tone with me." This meaning assumes, of course, that one is able to detect in a text intention-based qualities such as irony, sarcasm, tenderness, etc.--but one often is able to do this. More problematically, tone is sometimes used as a catch-all to identify textual qualities for which there simply are no other words. "Timbre" is similarly used in music to denote qualities of a sound other than pitch or loudness: "harmonic content," "attack and decay," "vibrato," et al. Any attempt to map these specific qualities onto poetry clearly invites cognitive dissonance on a grand scale. So we must look for equivalents: perhaps "gradations of semantic contrast," "degrees of expressive clarity and the rate at which they are deployed," and so on.

But would it ever be possible in a real-life scenario of classroom instruction to get people to think in such a minutely obsessive analytical fashion about things like tone and flow? Would it be desirable?

One little voice on my shoulder says there's a reason terms like flow and tone are vague: they allow people to be vague in a useful way and get on with what really matters. Another little voice on the other shoulder says that's a cop-out, that critical rigor in the exploration of seeming imponderables matters at least as much as any other aspect of the art. I can't really tell which voice is attached to a harp and which to a pitchfork.