Friday, January 26, 2007

Guest Poet Dept.: The Students of WR 341



An exquisite corpse by the students in my WR 341 (Poetry Writing) course.

I LOVE YOUR HAIR


I love your hair
it smells like the sea in winter
flooding the freezing ice poles
your hair sprawls into oblivion
creating an orange glow
like orangutan, a man of winter
who sings aloud throughout the night
the boat misses the shore

a line of poetry on it
blazes like an inferno
within my mind's eye
sparks flying glistening boldly
I can't help but dance to the Bollywood chorus
the lighthouse shines
the shinehouse lights into the second verse

the on/off switch on the side of my head is stuck
flashes of blue and green neon blind
forcing spasms of fluorescent skunks
tracers of hallucinogenic elbows
PVC veins with glowing soft dirt
snaking around my throat
filling my soul with Cocoa Puffs

oranges starving for affection
seek peace in fields of tar
bleak sunless alleys of gum
long roads sweltering alone
blessed angels rulers of infinity
I crack open like a ripe pomegranate
and see split before me--my soul!

your eyes cover my head in fog
blurry conceptions, where to die
looking, searching--must find a place
only the crash of the ocean waves heard
that feels good, even if it's not supposed to
the filtered sound's grittiness pains me nonetheless
ow ow ow ow ow

I am trying to hold onto the knowing
about the orange paisley curtains framing the
fuckin' land o' misery American Dream flag of hatred
my entire body engulfed by
vicious stinging butterflies
biases ring out in ghastly pages of
the textbook of ill-gotten gains

sadness wears my face like a clown
a clown of misshapen fortune
the Alsatian meat market down the street
reflects the passion of my undying love
the hanging meat brings back that memory
slimy sausage of unrequited love
burning desire to be consumed by whomever

the beautiful porcupine
bumblebee madness screams
and sobs at the same time, writhing
as surrounded, the honey's enslavement rot between combs of indecision, spikes, ladles
the prickling will not rest
it envelops the world
and doesn't speak so well to the soul

there were no footprints in the snow but he had been walking back and forth for an hour
or so but the initial habit forcing
him in and out of his favorite trousers
required that he never wear shoes
slowly forming a throne around his ankles
he began to sink into a dream world
simpering and shallow the one who goes there

to whom the mast does call
wet from this tremulous squall
humming waves of my mind are sleeping
dreaming of desserts and ice cream
sticky marmalade on ferrets' heads
toasted brightly
tasted lightly of lime-encrusted fish

skittle bricks and pie, cat's earnest desire to create
dip my palms into coffee beans and set my button to on
the stars begin to show
just as the coffee is brewed the moon says hello
yet the sun just finished its goodbye
and the upholstery smells of nighttime coffee
the stars vibrate from caffeine overload

wayward rhetoric steeling the wind
makes for nasty driving conditions (plan accordingly)
don't sneeze today you might crash
snitchy, snitchy, I feel it coming
a horn from the boat blasts in the fog
I am stranded, can't see anything but the Greek
haunting boat-song fractures the past

sitting, writing, bring it all back
the sky slowly turns dark
my knees are shaking, my brow starts to sweat, I cannot move the pen
and I cannot move the exclamation mark from my forehead
it flashes in bright red neon
the world understands zest
as the foreheads join, drowning exclamation marks to reverse unknowing

the sun sets behind the ocean
my face is aglow with orange
the dumpster behind me is radiant
furious moonlight falls upon itself
and I realize my face is getting moonburnt
of my own inner child, a race set apart by confusionism
I am all right with being lost


Saturday, January 13, 2007

Let Me Tell You Something




Now let me tell you something.

This is my blog, and I will blog about whatever I want, whenever I want. I will also not blog whenever I want not to blog.

I am a poet, and I often blog about poetry, but I will goddam well blog about pop music, or movies, or crime fiction, or candy canes, or hanging out with my friends, or what my twelve favorite brands of shoe polish are, or revolting bear embryos, or what Mighty Morphing Power Ranger I would be if I were a Mighty Morphing Power Ranger, if the mood should happen to strike me.

I will usually not blog about politics, but not because I think I shouldn't. Politics just depress me. Nevertheless, I reserve the right to blog about them whenever I want, should I decide that I can stand the anxiety I will inflict upon myself by doing so.

When I said "whenever I want not to blog" above, I was deliberately avoiding a split infinitive, but I will split infinitives if I feel like it. And I will avoid it when I feel like it.

I will delete old posts whenever the hell I want. I don't care who might have linked to them for whatever very important reason imagining that they would remain online forever.

Sometimes I go to my Netflix queue and rearrange the order of DVDs that won't come up for weeks, because I find it soothing. And I will blog about this soothing Netflix feeling if I want to.

I will divide all poetry into two polarized categories sometimes, and other times I will remark on how foolish it is to divide all poetry into two polarized categories. I will do it without guilt or shame.

I will namedrop if I can do it in a way that I can convince myself is "natural" and "unforced."

I will mention flarf if I want to, no matter how sick the entire universe, including me, might be of hearing the word. Flarf. Flarf. Flarf!

You know what? This post isn't even reactive to anything in particular. No one has said anything snarky to me recently, and this isn't directed at any specific person or persons. I just feel like being confrontational!

I probably will never send notices to the Buffalo Poetics list or wherever announcing what the last week's worth of posts on my blog have been about. But I reserve the right in case I change my mind.

I don't actually know the names of any of the Mighty Morphing Power Rangers. Do they even have names?

Sometimes on my old Movable Type blog, I would go into people's comments in my comment box and correct their typos without them asking me, because I felt obsessively compelled to do it. If Blogger allowed me to do this, I would probably continue to do it.

I may very well delete this post once I realize how embarrassing it is.

I haven't read a new book of poetry in weeks.

Oh wait, yes I have--Del Ray Cross's Lub Luffly, from Pressed Wafer. It's terrific!

I will keep using the word "terrific" even though I know that people make jokes about poets who praise everything by saying "terrific." Usually they're New York poets. Why is that?

I also read Rob Halpern's tiny little chapbook Disaster Suite from a press called, I think, Vigilance Society. It's terrific too!

Along with his book, Del sent me a copy of the beautiful Joy Street Press reprint of John Wieners' The Hotel Wentley Poems! Yay! We all know how terrific that is. Seriously, I've wanted a copy for years.

Personal vs. Aesthetic?


Interested in Reginald Shepherd's recent blogposts, including this one on "Personal Preference and Aesthetic Judgment." I don't think it's possible so neatly to consign the aesthetic purely to the object and the personal to one's response to said object. Another way of saying this: I don't think it's possible to separate completely the aesthetic from the personal, ever. Kant's injunction to adopt a disinterested perspective can only be obeyed once one has already sorted out the elementary distinction between one's investment in subject matter and one's concern for the formal qualities of the object. This is, of course, no simple matter. I may initially be drawn to a poem because, as Reginald points out, I am drawn to its subject matter. I think Jordan gave us a good example of this phenomenon yesterday in his mention of this Bela Lugosi poem. One reveres Bela Lugosi (naturally), and thus one wishes to embrace the poetic tribute. But the very resistance Jordan struggles with is evidence that liking the subject matter is not the same as liking the poem--or, if one's love for the subject tricks one into thinking one likes the poem, it is exactly that, a trick. This is what Kant is cautioning against, I think: the state of aesthetic unconsciousness in which one abandons one's critical sensibility out of sentiment for the subject matter (one could also insert "author" or "genre" and so forth in place of "subject matter"). In this state of delusion, one experiences a sensation that one mistakes for liking the poem, when in reality, what one likes is the external set of associations evoked by the poem.

Now, one could object that it is not possible to be mistaken about what one likes or doesn't like. If I read a poem and come away with an approving attitude, how on earth can anyone tell me that I am wrong in thinking that I like it? But a simple analogy should show that this objection doesn't fly. Suppose I like Cynthia, a woman I have spoken with by telephone on numerous occasions, but have never met in person. My liking of Cynthia is a substantial affection, based on my experience of sharing confidences with her, learning of her history, her beliefs, quirks, etc. Assume for argument's sake that everything I learn about her in the course of our conversations is true and accurate information. Now, suppose that one day Cynthia and I arrange to meet in person at a nearby coffee shop. At the last minute, however, Cynthia gets nervous and decides to send a friend in her place. The friend pretends that she is Cynthia, when in actuality she is, say, Daphne. Suppose that Daphne is nothing like Cynthia in real life, and that although I initially have no reason to doubt her, over the course of the conversation it becomes increasingly apparent that many of the qualities I value in Cynthia are nowhere in evidence. Where Cynthia is empathetic and delicate, for example, Daphne is callous and coarse. Nevertheless, because I am primed to like this woman, I struggle throughout our conversation to perceive those qualities I want to perceive, and through various processes of rationalization and self-deception, I manage to convince myself from time to time that I do in fact perceive them. I come away from our meeting a bit confused perhaps, but manage to sustain the sense that I like Cynthia, and--more to the point--that I like the woman with whom I have just been conversing, since I have reason to believe that she is Cynthia.

Let's try to map this situation onto an experience involving poetry. Say there is a poem, "The Cute Little Bears," by a poet, let's call him Andrew Mister. Say that I happen to have a great fondness for cute little bears. Say too that I am familiar with Mr. Mister's work, and that I hold it generally in high regard. My initial reaction upon learning of the existence of this poem, one could imagine, would be one of delight and anticipation. Let's suppose that the qualities I am prepared to encounter in the poem are qualities such as linguistic wit, saucy irreverence, the refined application of enjambment, and, above all perhaps, a vivid evocation of the irresistible cuteness of little bears. Now let's suppose that the actual poem is lacking on all these counts: it is dully prosaic, it evinces no rakish vigor to speak of, the lines are woodenly end-stopped, and its depiction of adorable cubs relies on every stale cliche in the book. Two responses are possible on my part: I may respond with disappointment, or I may attempt to adjust my response to fit my expectations. In the first instance, the problem disappears: I like cute little bears, I like a good deal of Mister's work, but I do not like this poem. Case closed. In the second, things are a little more complicated: I like bears, Mister, etc., and on the basis of this predisposition, I manage to blind myself to the poem's defects. Is it then accurate to say that I like the poem? I would argue that my sense of liking the poem in this instance parallels my sense that I like Cynthia when I am engaged in conversation with Daphne, and my projection of that liking onto Daphne. It is still the idea, and not the object, that I like, and the idea is not the actual woman/poem.

(I'm aware that this line of thought leads, perhaps, to inexorably formalist conclusions. I'm comfortable with that. I've always been a formalist. For me, it is always to some extent a poem's engagement with formal dynamics that makes or breaks it, even if that engagement is mediated and/or ironized on multiple levels, so that, for example, it exploits the concept of formlessness in order to achieve its effects.)

Reginald does, however, raise an important point by reversing the question: what about poems in which one admires formal qualities but dislikes the subject matter? He mentions Frost and Milton as examples of cases in which he recognizes the poet's achievement on a technical level, but rejects the thematic content. My answer, however, follows directly from what I've argued above: whatever reservations one may have about content, to the extent that one responds positively to the poet's execution on the level of material composition, one likes the poem. If one feels it necessary to distinguish between poems that one likes in this sense, and poems that one both likes and responds to favorably on the level of content, that's fine. Maybe those are poems that one loves, or as Woody Allen would say, lurves.

One can of course imagine--and for that matter attest to--the existence of an entire category of readers for whom thematic interestedness and formal appreciation are indistinguishable, or, more accurately, for whom the latter is negligible. The question then is whether their response to poetry can legitimately be termed "aesthetic" at all. Can the "personal" response, defined as a myopic concern with subject matter to the exclusion of every other consideration, be considered an aesthetic in itself? I won't rule this out, but there is a difference between, on the one hand, thus characterizing a readerly tendency in the abstract and, on the other hand, imagining a conscious, individual set of principles upon which artistic judgment may be formulated. "Aesthetic" would mean two very different things in these two cases, and only the second one is very interesting or useful from the point of view of evaluative criticism as it may be applied to individual poems.

Looking back over Reginald's post, I sense that on most counts we agree much more than we disagree, and much of what I've written could be dismissed as a quibble on the definitions of "like" and "poem," what the definition of "is" is, etc. My main reservation, I guess, is with his attempt to make a neat distinction between personal preference and aesthetic judgment by saying:
Aesthetic value is a quality of the artistic object. Personal preference is a matter of individual response to the artistic object, of an individual’s relation to and experience of that object.
Aesthetic value is a quality of the artistic object in the sense that, when all is said and done, one may point to specific aspects of construction and execution and say, this is well done, or this is poorly managed. But it should be fairly clear that such judgments must themselves inevitably be referred back to personal preferences and experiences, and that, accordingly, such preferences and experiences are always shaped by external aesthetic principles that one has internalized. Thus to hold the opinion that Frost's "Home Burial" is "powerful," regardless of whether one "likes" narrative poetry, is necessarily an expression of one's own personal affective preference at the same time that it is a rehearsal of a cultural aesthetic.

In the end, despite my declaration above of allegiance to formalist principles, I'm deeply skeptical about any set of absolute criteria for determining a "good" vs. a "bad" poem. Reginald's "personal"/"aesthetic" distinction serves the convenient purpose of settling this question without confronting the more radically difficult question underlying it: the question of whether "good" and "bad" can ever be more than articles of aesthetic faith that one uses as much to situate oneself socially and ideologically as to perform any act of "objective" evaluation.

Thursday, January 11, 2007

Sought Poems in Italian



My essay "Sought Poems," which originally appeared in 88: A Journal of Contemporary American Poetry no. 3, has been translated into Italian by Gherardo Bortolotti and published here.